First Chapter Critique
What To Expect
Get honest feedback on your opening chapter (up to 4,000 words) where Elizabeth will provide in-line comments and have a 30 minute coaching call with you. Feedback may include how to strengthen your opening lines, how to hook your ideal reader, clarifying questions, and minor edits for flow or helping with ‘show don’t tell’.
All manuscripts are personally edited by Elizabeth.
No programs, no AI, no artificial analysis.
Just a real, human being.
First Chapter Critique $100
+$25 per additional 1,000 words.
+$50 per additional 30 mins on coaching call
If you decide to book a full developmental edit, the cost of your first chapter critique will apply as credit towards the service!
What clients are saying…
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"She never once tried to change the story from my vision. She helped find the missing pieces but it was still my writing, my words, my story."
Katie Walker
YA Modern Fantasy
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"Absolutely amazing across the board. Really enjoyed working with her and all of her advice and edits were so helpful."
Raquel Raelynn, Author of The Balance of Fates
Sapphic New Adult Fantasy
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"Elizabeth Skarpnes has, no exaggeration, changed the path of this story in the best way. She approaches her work with a care and consideration that kept my voice front and center, but helped fill in those holes I was missing."
Katharine M Sweet, Author of Love Stories Are…
Contemporary RomCom
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"She had great thorough feedback that was easy to follow. I really appreciated the her quick turnaround time and how much care she put into my project."
Jasmine Little, Author of If We Say Goodbye
YA Coming of Age
Q&A with the Editor
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Yes, but only for developmental edits! Let me know during our initial conversations that you are interested in coming up with a payment plan and I will happily work with you to develop one. I understand editing prices can be a hardship so I am willing to tailor payment plans to suit your needs.
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Approximately 7 days depending on chapter length. You can request a rush order at additional expense which will be discussed.
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I primarily work on fictional stories. I am adaptable to many different genres and age group including but not limited to: fantasy, contemporary, romance, middle grade, young adult, new adult, & adult just to name a few!
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*Trigger warning for mentions of sensitive an upsetting subjects*
I will not read stories that include: nonconsensual sexual contact (rape), incest, sexual abuse, racist/homophobic/transphobic content. If you are unsure if your stories content will fall into any of these categories, please ask and discuss with me prior to discussing booking.
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The downpayment for developmental edits is to secure your booking.
The contract is to protect the client and the editor by making sure there is clear understanding. This is especially important for payment plans. Contracts are revisable for word count only up until the start date.
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Absolutely! Please fill out the interst form and we can discuss further. I offer free 15 minute no obligation consultations upon request where we can discuss your work and needs to determine if we are a good match for each other. I think that open dialogue and communication are key to mutual understanding.